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If everything was as easy as it seemed
Then what would be the point in sleep and dreams
If everything we were was all just make believe
Then i choose to believe in fictional things
Allow me to share a memory or two
Of broken promises of things we said we'd do
When we were young, Dumb
but love would pull us through
And i don't want to cry
I know to you it is a past time
i don't want to say goodbye
If i had but one dream you would close your eyes and wish for me
and If i choose to believe i can not force how i want us to be
You are new we are new and these are new words to sing
Give me a chance and i will prove i am who i claim to be
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So these are very fresh lyrics from my band Shoot The Moon. I felt like sharing something new. These lyrics are fairly different to my poetry which is part of the reason i wanted to post them. I will keep writing every day to improve my work.
i haven't heard these guys in forever +1 post value for reminding me of this song!
ReplyDeleteI just now realized the song in the sidebar was from your band. Derp.
ReplyDeleteit doesn't sound like the ska in your music box
ReplyDeletenice! keep it up! :)
ReplyDeletesound good.
ReplyDeletei think youre on the rith track
Wow that's some deep lyrics!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lyrics. I hope you find more old poems. I liked the previous one.
ReplyDeleteThey're really good!
ReplyDeleteWhen can we hear your music?
ReplyDeleteThese are pretty good.
ReplyDeleteI hope you will post the song here too, sounds lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like it!
ReplyDeletethose are some intersting lyrics! id like to hear the music that goes along with them :)
ReplyDeleteanyways nice blog, ill follow and support you!
nice job. i could never write this well especially if done everyday.
ReplyDeletePretty cool lyrics, I'd like to hear the song.
ReplyDeletesounds good but i think having sound would help to know if the lyrics fit or not.
ReplyDeleteI just love the first two line.s
ReplyDeleteThese look really good, but I would love to hear them in your voice, possibly upload a sound recording?
ReplyDeleteThey sound great!
ReplyDeletegood stuff thanks.
ReplyDeleteI didn't read em
ReplyDeleteSweet lyrics dude.
ReplyDeletei would like to hear the tune behind these lyrics!
ReplyDeleteYour poems always depress me :(
ReplyDeleteThese are some awesome lyrics.
ReplyDeleteNice lyrics.
ReplyDeleteWhy 'Shoot the Moon'?
ReplyDeletei like them :)
ReplyDeleteReally awesome man, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteLooks good man
ReplyDeleteI dont really know what i could say
ReplyDeleteI like the lyrics, but I couldn't tell if I liked the song until I heard the lyrics with the music.
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