Tuesday, 1 March 2011

An oldie (Untitled)

Your eyes so sweet and gentle
Re-writing the book of love
Indulging in a kiss too many
Your body flows like liquid, honey


If anyone has a name to suggest i am open for suggestions. I'm really loving the shorter poems recently. This is an oldie i dug out of my 'stash'. I think i was 16 when i wrote this for an English class but i can't fully remember.


I thought I'd share some useful links too

www.rhymer.com - If you are into rhyming and are stuck on a word this site can be very helpful. I do try and write from the heart but sometimes the words need a little help.

www.dictionary.reference.com/wordoftheday/ - Simple word of the day tool. I am always trying to build my knowledge of the written word. Today's word: Masticate


1.To grind or crush with or as if with the teeth in preparation for swallowing and digestion; to chew; as, "to masticate food."
2.To crush or knead (rubber, for example) into a pulp.
intransitive verb:
1.To chew food.



http://notepad-plus-plus.org/ - free notepad replacement with many more features. I use it to write up my poems and lyrics.


I will share more links soon!

29 comments:

  1. Great poem. I don't have any suggestions though.

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  2. That word of the day thing is pretty cool! Thanks.

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  3. Like the poem! I still do all my text editing with Notepad :P

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  4. I like the word of the day, makes me feel smart :D

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  5. Good tools! Ill pass this on to some other artistic bloggers like your self! Can't wait for a new poem!

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  6. I dunno, maybe you title can be an ambiguous reference to the person described in your poem
    e.g. "Him/Her" or "Soulmate"

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  7. i typed in orange in the rhymer site.

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  8. Neat tips for making your own poem.

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  9. I do the UrbanDictionary word of the day, not as useful. XD

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  10. DEFINITELY using that rhymer website. Thanks bro.
    http://squillard.blogspot.com/

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  11. thanks for the resource links! "Indulgence" is my recommendation for a name

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  12. wouw thanks for the sites! could help me ^^

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  13. Thanks for the cheating websites :P

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  14. Thanks for the word of the day link

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  15. Simple, but well done. I like it.

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  16. I like your short poems! I also like how you have the word rhymer right above the word of the day. What rhymes with "masticate?"

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  17. free notepad looks good, might use it! :) thanks!

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  18. Great poem and some handy info. I like the rhymer page a lot.

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  19. Wow you wrote this when you were 16? It's great.

    Call it 'passion'

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  20. I always frequent the word-of-the-day entry on the dictionary.com iPhone app.

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  21. hahah i love the word of the day, makes learning easier.

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