Monday, 28 February 2011

A Fluttering Thought

My lips cannot speak the words
The hands leave thoughts unwritten
My heart still screams
But my brain says do not listen
So this is nothing!


I had something longer planned today but instead i give you 'A Fluttering Thought'. It's about self preservation. It is very short indeed but these thoughts have to be, so i don't linger on them.

27 comments:

  1. Very simple, but well done. I like it.

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  2. your poems always inspire me!

    i am a guitarist and song writer

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  3. I like it i think its good that its small. it adds a little more effect and less drag. Well done!

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  4. I like it when they're short, it sticks in your mind better and gives the words more power.

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  5. Wo, I likethis template which is it???

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  6. The concept, the words and the title come together so well. Awesome stuff.

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  7. That's really deep... your personification is great

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  8. who cares if its short. as long as its good (it is btw).

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  9. I love your blog, I'm totally following!

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  10. i do not really get the last line, as in, how it wraps everything up

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  11. Ugh, my brain can be sooo uncooperative sometimes.

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  12. i enjoy checking up on your posts,

    you have a real talent with words!

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  13. I like it! Look forward to seeing more stuff in the future.

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  14. Is it were longer though, it wouldn't be a fluttering thought.

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