Re-writing the book of love
Indulging in a kiss too many
Your body flows like liquid, honey
If anyone has a name to suggest i am open for suggestions. I'm really loving the shorter poems recently. This is an oldie i dug out of my 'stash'. I think i was 16 when i wrote this for an English class but i can't fully remember.
I thought I'd share some useful links too
www.rhymer.com - If you are into rhyming and are stuck on a word this site can be very helpful. I do try and write from the heart but sometimes the words need a little help.
www.dictionary.reference.com/wordoftheday/ - Simple word of the day tool. I am always trying to build my knowledge of the written word. Today's word: Masticate
1.To grind or crush with or as if with the teeth in preparation for swallowing and digestion; to chew; as, "to masticate food."
2.To crush or knead (rubber, for example) into a pulp.
1.To chew food.
http://notepad-plus-plus.org/ - free notepad replacement with many more features. I use it to write up my poems and lyrics.
I will share more links soon!
Great poem. I don't have any suggestions though.
ReplyDeleteThat word of the day thing is pretty cool! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteLike the poem! I still do all my text editing with Notepad :P
ReplyDeleteI like the word of the day, makes me feel smart :D
ReplyDeleteGood tools! Ill pass this on to some other artistic bloggers like your self! Can't wait for a new poem!
ReplyDeleteI dunno, maybe you title can be an ambiguous reference to the person described in your poem
ReplyDeletee.g. "Him/Her" or "Soulmate"
i typed in orange in the rhymer site.
ReplyDeleteNeat tips for making your own poem.
ReplyDeleteI do the UrbanDictionary word of the day, not as useful. XD
ReplyDeleteDEFINITELY using that rhymer website. Thanks bro.
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Nice poem!!
ReplyDeletethanks for the resource links! "Indulgence" is my recommendation for a name
ReplyDeletewouw thanks for the sites! could help me ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks for the cheating websites :P
ReplyDeleteThanks for the word of the day link
ReplyDeleteName it Liquid Honey :P
ReplyDeletesick poems :D
ReplyDeleteSimple, but well done. I like it.
ReplyDeleteI like your short poems! I also like how you have the word rhymer right above the word of the day. What rhymes with "masticate?"
ReplyDeleteNEW CALLENGE: Use masticate IRL!
ReplyDeletefree notepad looks good, might use it! :) thanks!
ReplyDeletereally cool links!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and some handy info. I like the rhymer page a lot.
ReplyDeleteWow you wrote this when you were 16? It's great.
ReplyDeleteCall it 'passion'
I always frequent the word-of-the-day entry on the dictionary.com iPhone app.
ReplyDeletenotepad plus plus is awesome
ReplyDeletehahah i love the word of the day, makes learning easier.
ReplyDeleteCool stuff :D
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