Friday, 25 February 2011

How it felt

I forgot how she looked,
How she cried,
All I remember is her hands,
Crawling into the clasp of mine

I know how soft her skin felt,
That, I can recall,
She always wanted more,
But what i gave...was my all

This poem is a few months old. It was written after my long term girlfriend and i parted ways. It's short. But i wanted to create a feeling of curiosity and felt by keeping it short i could leave space for the imagination of someone reading it to fill in their own details. I don't want to say much but what inspired me to write this particular poem was unconditional love.


Not all my posts will be poetry. It just seems to be my theme at the moment. Sadly no picture today!

23 comments:

  1. This one is touching a beautiful, as always. I cannot wait for tomorrow's craft of the tongue.

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  2. I like the poetry man, keep it up.

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  3. I wonder if you're still such a romantic

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  4. Keep on doin what you're doin buddy.

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  5. Archon6:
    I love romance. I'm kinda naive in the fact i buy into love such as that described in books.

    remocon11
    I did in fact write this. I'm glad you like it.

    Thank you for the comments all!

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  6. Very nice poetry, short, but very sweet.

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  7. makes me wanna cry.. very biutiful!!

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  8. I think I'll just go shit a sadness brick.

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  9. short but good. in poetry, it's often best to use the least amount of words to get your point across, so it doesn't have to be long to be good. i like it.

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  10. I think you should be published in a magazine for the blind. your that damn good.

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  11. hey man, i could relate to that even. nice job.

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  12. hey mate, like your blog a lot, crazy stuff ;) come check mine http://biebersexgf.blogspot.com/ :D

    aint no leacher ;)

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  13. Sorry to hear that...I had a very similar situation a while back and now we don't even talk anymore...no closure at all :/

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  14. this is beautiful, the feelings sadly aren't

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