My lips cannot speak the words
The hands leave thoughts unwritten
My heart still screams
But my brain says do not listen
So this is nothing!
I had something longer planned today but instead i give you 'A Fluttering Thought'. It's about self preservation. It is very short indeed but these thoughts have to be, so i don't linger on them.
sweet
ReplyDeleteVery simple, but well done. I like it.
ReplyDeleteyour poems always inspire me!
ReplyDeletei am a guitarist and song writer
Good thought.
ReplyDeleteomg so nice!!
ReplyDeletenice one actually
ReplyDeleteI like it i think its good that its small. it adds a little more effect and less drag. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI like it when they're short, it sticks in your mind better and gives the words more power.
ReplyDeleteWo, I likethis template which is it???
ReplyDeleteThe concept, the words and the title come together so well. Awesome stuff.
ReplyDeleteThat's really deep... your personification is great
ReplyDeletewho cares if its short. as long as its good (it is btw).
ReplyDeleteI love your blog, I'm totally following!
ReplyDeleteNice short poem.
ReplyDeletei do not really get the last line, as in, how it wraps everything up
ReplyDeleteUgh, my brain can be sooo uncooperative sometimes.
ReplyDeletenice
ReplyDeleteI like this.
ReplyDeletei enjoy checking up on your posts,
ReplyDeleteyou have a real talent with words!
good post
ReplyDelete+ followed:)
I'm listening mate!
ReplyDeleteThats deep man.
ReplyDeleteI like it! Look forward to seeing more stuff in the future.
ReplyDeleteIs it were longer though, it wouldn't be a fluttering thought.
ReplyDeleteAnother nice one.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it, well done.
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