She falls and crashes in mighty splashes
Against my window panes
She trickles, she lands, through shattered glass
Run through my floor like veins
And When rain collides with tear drops cried
The past is washed away
Through stormy skies comes sweet surprise
Her name? she is the rain
I wanted to try something which was a bit easier on the mind. Something rhythmic. It's short again but its Saturday and i could use a chill out from a stressful week. Happy weekend all!
Thats a really nice poem. I'll read it again, when it rains!
ReplyDeleteNice poem, I had pretty stressful week to. Thank god for weekends.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your saturday man try and chill out and lay back
ReplyDeleteSounds great!
ReplyDeleteit's good. short and sweet.
ReplyDeletereally nice content
ReplyDeleteIt may be short, but it's good! Great post; I can't wait to see more!
ReplyDeleteSimple, and I like it! Good work!
ReplyDeletei like it!
ReplyDeletevery nice, good to see you're posting even on the weekend.
ReplyDeleteI really like this one. Simple but emotional.
ReplyDeleteI love winter and rain. Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteits short but sweet. keep it up!
ReplyDeletewow....deep
ReplyDelete"And When rain collides with tear drops cried
ReplyDeleteThe past is washed away" Awesome line...let it rain...let it rain.
So dark. I like it though.
ReplyDeleteI loved this, it sounds awesome. Following.
ReplyDeleteI love how the poem creates a rhythm by alternating from longer lines to shorter ones.
ReplyDeleteI really like this, it flows very nicely.
ReplyDeletenice stuff man, you should get published.
ReplyDeleteIs this original? I like it, a lot. Interesting. following for more.
ReplyDeleteThese could be lyrics to a real indie song
ReplyDeleteGood stuff as usual.
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed this poem
ReplyDeleteNice entries, I just caught up on them, keep them coming!
ReplyDeleteI really like it. Especially the lack of rhymes. Too many rhymes make a poem sound silly and gimmicky.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, i liked it!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem :)
ReplyDeleteI really loved the rhythm, made me feel like you do on those rainy days. Great poem, following for sure!
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I liked the ending... beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the kind words. Yes this is completely original too. :)
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