Saturday 26 February 2011

She is the Rain

She falls and crashes in mighty splashes
Against my window panes
She trickles, she lands, through shattered glass
Run through my floor like veins

And When rain collides with tear drops cried
The past is washed away
Through stormy skies comes sweet surprise
Her name? she is the rain



I wanted to try something which was a bit easier on the mind. Something rhythmic. It's short again but its Saturday and i could use a chill out from a stressful week. Happy weekend all!

35 comments:

  1. Thats a really nice poem. I'll read it again, when it rains!

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  2. Nice poem, I had pretty stressful week to. Thank god for weekends.

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  3. Enjoy your saturday man try and chill out and lay back

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  4. It may be short, but it's good! Great post; I can't wait to see more!

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  5. Simple, and I like it! Good work!

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  6. very nice, good to see you're posting even on the weekend.

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  7. I really like this one. Simple but emotional.

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  8. I love winter and rain. Nice poem.

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  9. its short but sweet. keep it up!

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  10. "And When rain collides with tear drops cried
    The past is washed away" Awesome line...let it rain...let it rain.

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  11. I loved this, it sounds awesome. Following.

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  12. I love how the poem creates a rhythm by alternating from longer lines to shorter ones.

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  13. I really like this, it flows very nicely.

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  14. nice stuff man, you should get published.

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  15. Is this original? I like it, a lot. Interesting. following for more.

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  16. These could be lyrics to a real indie song

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  17. Nice entries, I just caught up on them, keep them coming!

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  18. I really like it. Especially the lack of rhymes. Too many rhymes make a poem sound silly and gimmicky.

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  19. I really loved the rhythm, made me feel like you do on those rainy days. Great poem, following for sure!

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  21. thx for the share, biutiful poem

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  22. Wow... wat more can I say. Followed!

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  23. Nice work bro. followed!
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  24. I liked the ending... beautiful

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  25. Thanks for all the kind words. Yes this is completely original too. :)

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